the poem: -is clearly structured -is divided into...stanzas -each consisting of....lines. (-the first consist of..lines, the secend of.....) there is a clear break -in line.../after line../between the ...and....stanza, marked by(the comma, the full stop, the break in the rhythm...) the syntax in the poem is dominated by...(short/incomplete/complete....sentences) the arragement of rhymes is -aa bb(rhyming couples) abab(crossed rhyme) abba(embracing rhyme) -..in all stanzas/in stanza...
Why, Mom? I went to a party Mom, I remembered your words. You told me not to drink, so I drank no alcohol. I felt very proud mummy, just like you said I would. I plan to not drink and drive, Mom, even though the others are. I know that it was right, Mom, I know you're always right. The party is ending, Mom, everyone is driving. When I got into my car, Mom, I knew that I'd get home. Because of your education. So responsible and sweet. I started to drive away, and pulled out into the street. But the other driver did not see me and hit me with full force.
You are in my dreams and thoughts floating like water through my mind When I'm awake I live my life though I wish you would live it with me. When I'm asleep I dream of you, the only time when I can be with you. Oh how i wish I could look into your eyes and how I wish I could see you smile. My only chance to be with you is hand in hand through wonderland. I want yout touch, I want your love I want you with me through all my life. Thinking of you makes my day so wonderful, talking to you makes my day even better.
rosen sind rot veilchen sind blau du likst das, dass weiß ich genau rosen sind rot, ich heiße peter, das ergibt keinen sinn, thermometer roses are gay violets are gayer, fuck this poem and listen to slayer rosen sind rot veilchen sind rot büsche sind rot zäune sind rot FUCK mein garten brennt! roses are red violets are blue, vodka costs less, than dinner for two roses are red violets are blue, stones are grey, YOU DON'T SAY roses are red, my screen is blue, i'm sitting here, thinking: WTF did i do?!?! likeeee ;DD